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Post by Bhu ♥ Irwin on Mar 4, 2011 10:50:45 GMT -5
The humans don't know how to handle it, this change. Their monsters have gone soft, even the cruelest one of all. The harshest of the monsters are those who wander without purpose, outside the pack. But that musn't be how it is. It wasn't always like that. But then love found the leaders and grew into living beings.
The puppets have broken free, the creations growing minds of their own. Bidziil and Carska once mastered over the Pack by enforcing fear. But now, they love each other, and they love their kind. Things are allowed to slip past unpunished, or only a slap on the wrist given. It was once a single act of disobedience would bring death upon the rebel. But no, independent thoughts are welcomed, and even encouraged, among this new generation. If that was the worst, then the humans would not be unsettled. But there's a bigger problem.
Carska and Bidziil have had pups.
The once feared monsters have a flaw, a weakness. Sooner or later, their foes will catch on. Carska would risk all for her children, and Bidziil may hesitate, but he'd follow suit. The canines do not know that the humans are well aware of the untrained offspring. The parents will guide them gently through life, thus giving them a kinder mindset. So not only are the parents weaker with this new burden, but they are raising a softer generation--which will only raise kinder generations after them. Soon the Folami will be nothing but a domestic race, a breed to curl in the homes of the humans and befriending cats of all sizes. The makers can't allow their creations to take this route.
So they have planned to take him.
Him, the alpha, Bidziil. Take him back to his master, create a meaner beast then he was originally. His pups will be brought up in the harshest manner once they are through retraining Bidziil. It will take months, perhaps even a year. His pack will think he's dead for sure, and a new ruler will come to claim the land. This ruler will be an outsider, young. Carska will be faced with a choice, stand against this new alpha at the price of her pups lives, or live as a commoner, with her children safely by her side. She'll have to raise them alone.
This new ruler will be harsh, but helpful. He'll expect to be honored and glorified, and he will kill to gain power. But he won't mind getting his paws dirty to help his pack succeed. A jealous master, any who show loyalty to Carska or her young heirs will be executed, no questions asked. And that lioness and blind man that wander like ghosts through the lands will omegas with no mercy. Toys to train with, as Abeni was originally used as. No one sleeps unless they recieve his permission, no one eats until he's eaten. Slaves--they're all slaves.
But a year will pass and Bidziil will return. He'll be a new man; cold, merciless, unforgiving. The new Alpha will be towered over and given a choice; step down or be killed. Bidziil was bred to be alpha, and alpha he will be. There'll be no mercy.
The dogs may think things will go back to normal, but that idea will quickly be shredded. Turning his eyes to his once beloved, the man will only snap a harsh statement, "Alphess, I am appalled you have let such a young fool replace me on my throne. For that, you shall not be my equal. Alphess, you rule over those below us, but you answer to me." That's it. He doesn't say her name, he doesn't say he missed her. She's his second in command, and any failure to obey will be punished with death.
He doesn't acknowledge his children.
And so this new Bidziil will rule, having seen things he dare not speak. Skoll is a foul word, mercy to any a foriegn concept. The pack is no longer a family--it's a plantation.
But maybe, just maybe, there'll be hope. Mahal, the favored child before Bidziil was taken by the humans, is still the favored, it seems. Bidziil doesn't demand anything extreme from the boy, or doesn't look at him at all. It's as if he doesn't see young Mahal. But maybe that lack of vision is by choice--maybe if Mahal is taken in by the eyes of the ruler, his act may come to an end.
Maybe, just maybe, the pack's future lays heavily upon the yearlings shoulders.
Needed: Lucifer--male--the dog that takes over the pack in Bidziil's absence (be sure to look at the personality traits given to him in the plot when you make his biography; you may make his history however you want; he is a young adult; make him look anyway you want; anyone can play him, no matter how many high positions you have; post a ten sentence example of you RPing HIM in this thread, if I accept yours, go ahead and make the BIO)
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Post by I L Y I C H on Mar 8, 2011 15:10:07 GMT -5
This is going to be absolutely amazing <3 Poor Carska, and poor Bidziil and poor puppies D: The folami lands are about to fall straight into the pit of hell aren't' they?
Ill say right now that Carska will step down from her post when Bidziil comes back, and she'll never forgive him. Ever. Hatred will become her only feelings towards the father of her cubs, and she'll hunker at a level she would have once died to get away from. If it ever comes to leaving she will run with Daiade and Abeni and take as many folami as will come with her. Maybe it could lead to a family vs family war? Carska vs the new altered Bidziil.
She will hate Lucifer with a passion that could rival her hatred for her old master, and she will treat him in such a manor. In a flat out fight between her and him she would feel she would have some equality and she is unafraid of him. Its when Bidziil comes back that she'll snap. Her cubs and her family (the lower ranking love connected folami) will be the only animals she speaks to. Bidziil, Babylon, and the other loyal monsters will never see her eyes again. Carska will never forgive them, or the humans. They are all monsters, all sick disgusting monsters.
It is the ultimate betrayal and she will hate Bidziil for the rest of her life for it.
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Post by Bhu ♥ Irwin on Mar 8, 2011 16:01:34 GMT -5
Sounds amazing! And to make matters worse for poor Carska, the family will be even more split as her daughter, Alonda, decides to stay with Bidziil. Not because she's a daddy's girl, she just likes this new bloodlust in the pack and won't leave it for anything in the world. I'm not sure what'll happen with Ekshen, Cenzulome, or Mahal, since I don't play 'em But if Carska does leave and Mahal decides to go with her, that'll leave a very angry and depressed Bidziil The humans trained and chemically altered Bidziil enough to get Carska out of his head, but for some reason Bidziil still adores that cub. He won't admit it, but he loves his son. Maybe it's a Skoll given trait that is embedded in him, lol I just like my bad boy having a weakness, and Mahal happens to be Bidziil's strange little flaw
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Post by I L Y I C H on Mar 10, 2011 16:12:39 GMT -5
Poor Bidziil, Mahal wont even hesitate. He'll side with his mother and tell his father straight out "You never loved Moma, and you never loved me" and turn tail and walk away with Carska. This is gonna be some depressing roleplay coming up xD Carska will speak to no one except her loyal puppies, and she'll drop to an omega standing before she runs off with Daiade and Abeni... if their not already dead xD But If you want Daiade can be killed or severely injured and Mahal can take his place with Skoll...?
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Post by Bhu ♥ Irwin on Mar 10, 2011 16:26:33 GMT -5
I think severely injured will be more fun because then Abeni will get to mature some more as she has to take on more responsibility to help Carska, Mahal, and whomever else survive and care for him The injury could eventually lead to him dying, though, if that's what you prefer Any scenerio will be fun for me because Abeni is dramatic
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Post by I L Y I C H on Mar 11, 2011 16:48:12 GMT -5
Ill go with severely injured then, it'll be fun to see Abeni and Carska fretting over him xD Poor old blind man~
If the pack dose split in two what do you think the human's response to that would be?
I feel bad for Carska though, Mahal will get over it, he realizes his father has changed and thinks that the man never really loved him, but Carska's different. She'll be under the impression that she let him trick her into believing he loved her. She'll go all manic-depressive on everyone for a wile before she gets her alpha blood back xD
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Post by Bhu ♥ Irwin on Mar 11, 2011 20:35:47 GMT -5
Haha, when that does happen, the war will have past so it will lead to a new plot being let out So I have time to brainstorm a human responce. Any ideas?
Aww, that should be fun! Abeni will try to help, so I just hope Carska doesn't go all berserk and be like 'eat your face' type thing xD Or else Abeni will be a faceless lioness trying to help the folami that took her face I'm thinking Carska will never fall in love again? I'm kind of sad to see the BidziilxCarska relationship die. They had something special. Stupid humans always screwing things up But this will bring on a whole new series of events
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Post by lapara on Mar 12, 2011 1:26:20 GMT -5
Cenzo will stick with his mom. He doesn't like the idea of fighting and cruelty, and he never was really much of a daddy's boy anyway. Though this will sort of be a bit of a shock for him *cough* understatement of the century *cough*, since he still hasn't gotten the idea of the fact that the world is a cruel place. He'll try to cheer up Carska but I'm not sure if it will help or if she'll extend her Abeni 'I'MA EAT YOUR FACE' thing to Cenzo too. If that happens I believe he will run away because of his dramaticness. STUPID HUMANS!!! Always messing things up! *grumbles something about blowing them all up for their stupidity of breaking up Carska and Bidzil*
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Post by I L Y I C H on Mar 12, 2011 13:39:55 GMT -5
If Bidziil ever comes to the point where he'll try to get her back he may be able to fight his way back but it'll be a very very hard road. And he'll never hold the same place in her heart as he did. He'll take up a smaller conflicted shattered spot.
Carska will never eat Abeni D: In fact the lion will fall into the pup title in Carska's mind. Alonda leaving will hurt her greatly, but Cenzo and Mahal will be her saviors ( and the other male if kunabee has him stay with his mom.) Abeni will be looked at as an odd smelling daughter, and Daiade will become more of a father figure to them. If the pack dose split up then Paradox will be going with Carska wile Babylon wil stay with the pack... I'm not sure what I'll do with Paragon yet but I think she will react in someway.
Also speaking of the war are we gonna start that soon? Cause Im going to be gone for two weeks starting on the 20th for a class trip =C
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Post by Bhu ♥ Irwin on Mar 13, 2011 9:02:44 GMT -5
I am happy Cenzo is going to stay with Carska. Bidziil is gonna be a total @*& so Carska is going to need her children more than he. Much more Now we just need to see where Ekshen's loyalties lie.
I am very relieved that Bidziil has a chance to get her back, if only minorly. I was saddened by the thought of it all coming to a perminant end. I like what they have now
Yay for Abeni being "adopted" by Carska! That will be fun
So, I am just doing this for my ownself. I need lists in order to keep my brain organized:
Bidziil:- Allana (unwillingly)
- Alonda
- Alaois
- Helsa
- Nimrod
Carska:- Ayita
- Evangeline (sneakingly)
- Jeremiah
- Logan
- Clarimonde
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Post by I L Y I C H on Mar 13, 2011 12:28:33 GMT -5
Okay Also if no one else wants him I can take Lucifer. He would stay in the pack after Bidziil came back in hopes of assassinating him I think. Also here is my list
Bidziil
- Babylon
- Hati (creating now)
- Lucifer
Carska
- Mahal
- Daiade
- Paradox
Also I'm working on a series of CarskaXBidziil tributes for the current end of their relationship, if anyone has ideas...
EXAMPLE
That woman was a traitor to her kind, willing to let love over ride her true programing. She took it so far as to pine over her lost alpha. I was thoroughly apalled. And Yet! It was not only this that had me watching the moith of her den. That woman, the alphess had a will I had not forseen. And she hated me and with her at least half the pack. My lips withered teeth glinting in the moonlight. Under my reign the royal children had almost out grown their bed, and now my eyes rested darkly on their soft weak heads. Weaklings all of them except maybe Alonda, but their mother showed me an infuriating lack of loyalty and at least the black mutt followed suit. Bidziil wasn't the leader anymore I was and if they didn't start to recognize this fur is going to fly.
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Post by Bhu ♥ Irwin on Mar 13, 2011 19:15:24 GMT -5
I just now noticed your earlier question, Ilyich. The war is going to start soon, but we can wait until after you get back. I will wait until then to have Bidziil get taken, too. Then the cats and dogs will all fall to Hell at the same time!
I'd love you to play Lucifer! Thank you!
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Post by I L Y I C H on Mar 13, 2011 20:11:13 GMT -5
I'm so pumped. We can start this week if you wannt? I'm not leaving for DC until Sunday and ill have minimal access the second week... Also I really want to start this plot xD
-waggles eyebrows-
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Post by Bhu ♥ Irwin on Mar 14, 2011 16:32:28 GMT -5
Sure! I will go lock up Peaceless and send it over to archives and I will be sure to start up a thread consisting of the humans coming to take Bidziil. We can work up some emotional/sentimental drama of his capture xD It will really shake Bidziil up, I know, because he has put all his love and loyalty into the humans and now they take him from his beloved? Not cool. Not cool at all
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